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Alone With Death
22 July, 2007
Author: Hazzard

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I am alone in this old house,
I hear a knock,
I am scared,
My heart is pounding as I walk,
Pounding!
Pounding!
Pounding!
Pounding!
I open the door,
"AHHHHHH"
Cold steel in my heart,
I am dead.

------- Author's Notes -------

This is my first poem I wrote. I was in fifth grade and this was the last day of my innocence.

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Shiloh (66.24.112.118) -- Sunday, July 22 2007, 08:32 am

Welcome aboard.

The first step is the longest, and the hardest to make. Once you do that, though, it seems that it is a compulsion to build upon that step, and I look forward to seeing the other steps you make. Was actually a bit shocked to see you share a bit of your soul like this, but the shock was pleasant, really. Nice to have you with us. Please,... continue....
 
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