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Unhood Your Eyes: Ballad Of Two Souls
21 September, 2007
Author: Miztrebor

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She hides from the world
With thoughts of shame,
With hooded eyes,
And a covered smile.
But he who adores her
Opens all of this up,
And sees her within.

There is a beauteous soul
Deep down below, inside.
He knows all this,
This, which he doesn’t want to be without.

Their deep conversations,
Let down her guard,
Lying for long hour in the grass
Up there on that hill.
Lying face to face,
Cheek to cheek,
Something is starting to begin.

It is their secret
Their spot to be together.
A place to be alone from the world,
A place to be themselves.
No need to hide under veils or guises
Safely in his arms under the sky she shines.

Comfort him, oh woman of beauty,
Comfort the man you’re with.
You are what makes him enjoy life.
To smile for no reason,
Even when you are nowhere near
(Only in his thoughts.)

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Amanda Burt (209.183.187.244) -- Saturday, September 22 2007, 09:19 pm

Unhood Your Eyes: Ballad of Two Souls

This reminds me of the commecement of intimacy and the good feeling you possess when meeting somone new
Jennifer Knaggs (74.76.190.113) -- Sunday, January 25 2009, 04:31 am

Amazing

It sounds like this girl is amazing, and these two people have a very deep relationship.
 
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