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Now, Later, And Before This
Author: Shiloh

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I want to cry.
Now, later, and before this.
It's a funny, weird feeling,
heavy inside of me,
like some kind of big block of something inside,
weighing in on my emotions.
I feel empty, lost, bewildered,
because I don't know what this is.
And it aches,
and I can't see it,
can't reach it,
can't understand it,
but I sure can feel it...
and I want to cry.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

catyrose (128.123.84.125) -- Wednesday, October 3 2007, 06:34 am

very good description

of what it feels like to be depressed. I work with people diagnosed w mental illness. We are beginning a poetry/writing workshop, would you mind if I used your poem? I'll be sure and give you credit.
shiloh (66.24.112.118) -- Wednesday, October 3 2007, 05:41 pm

use of poem

sure, go ahead - i'm actually flattered a bit. let me know how things go as far as the reaction to the poem, if you don't mind? peace... hank
 
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