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Troubled Minds
Author: Marilyn A F Longfellow

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Let's take a walk dear troubled minds.
To a place of peace I'm sure you'll find.
We'll go and see! What will set you free.
Come now! Their goes Happiness, and Good with Hope.
Follow them. Throw away that dope.
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Shut your eyes. But don't be blind.
God's Holy light head you'll find.
Keep walking. Hold my hand if need.
Toward the light a gate you'll see.
Satan's here with evil thought's .
But You and I " IN GOD WE TRUST!"
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And Hope is at the finish line.
Almost their! Come troubled minds!
The gate is straight, And few will find.
Walk fast and sure. Leave burdens behind.
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Satan's coming! Do not wait!
The path is narrow, Open the gate.
We're at the end! God says come in!
And in this place your new life will begin!

------- Author's Notes -------

[ Poet' View: "LET TODAY BE THE FIRST DAY OF THE REST OF YOUR LIFE"]

NATIONAL SUICIDE PREVENTION MONTH

Let today be the first day of the rest of your life....

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Bipedalguy (75.67.182.104) -- Sunday, October 14 2007, 02:24 pm

Great Message !!

I think that's a great poem with a positive attitude and a positive message.
Keep it up! Bipe
MAFLongfellow (4.131.40.94) -- Tuesday, October 23 2007, 04:16 pm

Troubled Minds

THANKS BIPE, MARILYN
 
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