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Rain Drops
9 February, 2004
Author: Fairy

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The tears fall from my eyes
I'm thinking rain drops from the skys
he doesnt see whats going on inside
he just keeps jumping on every ride
he's looking in from far away
I wish there was something I could say
to bring him closer to my soul
and quit falling back into this whole
he doesnt see who I really am
I keep praying for him to cross the dam
though my rivers are very deep
and mountains around me jagged and steep
I keep on thinking he'll find his way
I just have to give it another day
I dont know how long I should wait
but I fear it will soon be to late
im not sure how to say what I feel
I'm not even sure if my feelings are real
the tears i'm crying from my eyes
are they just rain drops from the skies?

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Britney (67.136.84.49) -- Sunday, February 13 2005, 07:46 pm

Beautiful

I loved this poem! I can so relate to this great great great writing!!!! :) ~Britney~
Keyonna Farrell (205.188.116.197) -- Sunday, February 13 2005, 11:25 pm

Wow...

Your metaphorical meanings are so deep and this poem is so well written. I undersatnd fully. Thanks alot for sharing.
 
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