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Was I Gone From Their Mind
31 October, 2007
Author: Hope

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Was silence my wake up call
Had I been too blind to see
Maybe they do not remember
Love they expressed to me

Its becoming harder to believe
When they said they care
I wonder where they could be
After promising to be there

It appears they closed me out
Was this a silent goodbye
Its the not knowing that hurts
If only they could say why

Why did this happen I wonder
The reasons I failed to find
After years of being so close
Was I gone from their mind

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Terrie* (67.187.237.233) -- Thursday, November 1 2007, 01:55 am

Hope,

i feel the emotions here-- been there done that--- now i say to myself "WAS I OUT OF MY MIND" thank you for sharin'
heaven (208.182.196.194) -- Thursday, December 6 2007, 07:26 pm

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this poem is very good.i like it alot.yet it makes me wonder if u are looking back on this time or if you are there as you write..anyway if you would like you can check out my poems....and as for this one i love it...
 
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