I Try To Keep Positive
Author: Hope


Continuation I hoped for
I had written nothing new
Many unfinished poems
Nothing much I could do

Its this over active mind
Thoughts sent to and fro
Verses being set aside
Awaits to follow the flow

I feel like I am stranded
On the paths to nowhere
While needing an outlet
I scribble here and there

As I try to keep positive
Tomorrow is another day
Maybe poems will build
Like steps along the way


Comments on this poem/writing:

Bipedalguy ( -- Saturday, November 17 2007, 06:50 pm

Sounds familiar.

I have lots of unfinished poems. So many, in fact, that I maintain a folder called "poems in process".
When I can't think of a new subject, I refer to that folder. I finished and submitted one of them early this morning. (named "God Only Knows")
I think it was too early in the morning.

I like your poem. Keep it up !!
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