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Teary Death
Author: Brian Hamm

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You aren't afraid to show yourself.
Your not scared of me,
not scared of disappearing.
You run down my face with confidence,
with sorrow,
with sadness,
flowing at your own pace.
Until you reach my nose, my cheeks, my chin,
you drip,
ending your path,
as I wish to end mine.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

hihi (74.69.63.48) -- Thursday, January 24 2008, 10:32 pm

confused

wht is the poem suppose 2 mean?
Brian Hamm (68.218.205.120) -- Thursday, February 28 2008, 08:26 pm

my bad

sorry i took so long

its kinda like the life of a tear . like referring to the trail it leaves as the life it made .
anonymous (68.218.205.120) -- Thursday, February 28 2008, 08:28 pm

forgot to add ..

and the tear referring to how bad i think my own life is
Maryam Khan Habib (109.155.46.32) -- Tuesday, February 28 2012, 07:50 pm

WOW!

I really like this poem its legend i think it needs to go on Facebook or maybe on youtube you will get load's of likes
Tarna (75.16.235.240) -- Wednesday, February 29 2012, 02:03 am

Very Nice

I really like the personification of the tear. Very nicely done... I enjoyed this poem greatly.
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