Author: Brian Hamm
You aren't afraid to show yourself.
Your not scared of me,
not scared of disappearing.
You run down my face with confidence,
flowing at your own pace.
Until you reach my nose, my cheeks, my chin,
ending your path,
as I wish to end mine.
Comments on this poem/writing:
|hihi (126.96.36.199) -- Thursday, January 24 2008, 10:32 pm|
wht is the poem suppose 2 mean?
|Brian Hamm (188.8.131.52) -- Thursday, February 28 2008, 08:26 pm|
sorry i took so long
its kinda like the life of a tear . like referring to the trail it leaves as the life it made .
|anonymous (184.108.40.206) -- Thursday, February 28 2008, 08:28 pm|
and the tear referring to how bad i think my own life is
|Maryam Khan Habib (220.127.116.11) -- Tuesday, February 28 2012, 07:50 pm|
I really like this poem its legend i think it needs to go on Facebook or maybe on youtube you will get load's of likes
|Tarna (18.104.22.168) -- Wednesday, February 29 2012, 02:03 am|
I really like the personification of the tear. Very nicely done... I enjoyed this poem greatly.
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