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Reflections Of The Lost
Author: Brian Hamm

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I gaze into your surface
trying to see past you.
Wondering what goes on,
curious to see what your made of.
But I see nothing...
just me hopelessly standing there
staring,
blocking the view,
Cause I can't see past myself.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Willahh (170.190.40.78) -- Saturday, December 1 2007, 07:01 pm

~Beautiful~

This is very profound, Brian. I look forward to reading more from you.
Brian Hamm (76.106.181.145) -- Wednesday, December 5 2007, 02:11 pm

Thanks :)

thanks :D i already got more up if you wanna read them , i put them all in the same category
 
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