vinebar

Where Do I Belong?
13 December, 2007
Author: Seizure

vinebar

If you're doing what you feel is real, is it real? what's the deal?
Is anyone gonna care about a thing that you feel?
Can you make it through the storm without going somewhere warm?
Can you do the things that suck in life to make it all transform?
Are you gonna freeze alone without a place to call a home
Disappearing in the dark never to be known?
And I never really knew about a dream without a sting
But for the love of f*cking god, can you take me in your wing?
I did everything I could, what I should, like you would
I'm all alone, never to be understood
No one ever really cared about a thing that I tried
You lied to my pride, and you killed what's inside
Now I'm feeling dark without a hint of the light
And I've lost my strength to even try to fight
Now I'm just an empty shell never doing well
Yeah we'll meet again... on our way to hell

I defied the fates, I tried to grow my soul
Into something better that could make me whole
No one even noticed, if they did they didn't care
Now I know in my heart that I don't have a prayer
Help me god, show the light, tell me I did something right
No one knows, what the hell? How can I lose this fight?
Now I'm too far gone but I'm still falling down
I'm like a fallen king that has lost his crown
The world all around me seems cracked and jaded
They don't seem to know that their lives are faded
what the hell, what is right? Where will they all be tonight?
I know one thing, listen close, no one's future's looking bright
Did you leave your mark on this life we live?
Is there anything more that you can even give?
Don't follow my path, for me it's much too late
You still have a change to go shift your fate

I never thought I would last this long
I never knew I could be this strong
I never thought that it would end so wrong
Where do I belong?

vinebar

Comments on this poem/writing:

LinzAy (72.189.15.210) -- Monday, April 14 2008, 01:21 am

...

You still come here? I love the lines that are more than one statement....example..."i did everything I could, what I should, like you would" miss ya!
Seizure (69.250.238.244) -- Sunday, January 17 2016, 08:23 am

Almost 8 years too late!

I'm sure this comment won't reach you... being in response to a comment almost a decade old, but I miss you too LinzAy
 
Name:                                           Remember Me

Comment Title:

Comment / Ammendment:

Please complete the recaptcha below for spam prevention:

Click here to read other Poems by Seizure

vinebar

Poetic Dreams Other's Poetic Dreams Submit a Poem New This Week Forum Home

Copyright©2017-1999 by Rebecca R. Hammack

COPYRIGHT NOTICE: All Rights Reserved.   No part of this website, including all pictures and written words,  may be reproduced or copied in any manner from this website without  permission of the original author of the work.  All poetry and pictures herein remain the sole property of the original author and/or copyright owner.  All poetry on this website has been submitted by the original author of the work. To contact any author of the work please e-mail: dreamer@dreamersreality.com  so the proper person may be notified.