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Almost There
Author: Leah

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Your almost there
A new life is here for the taking
Even though your heart is breaking
There is hope for tomorrow
Pretty soon you'll have no more sorrow
Work real hard to see the light
Gather up your strength and hold on tight
You can live a good life.....

------- Author's Notes -------

This is a song that I made up about 3 years ago. It sounds more like a chorus and needs some verses to go along with it but I think it sounds nice the way it is, maybe I'll add on to it sometime but this is it for now! I started singing it today for some reason so I thought that I would post it on here, hope you like it!

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Tarna (75.16.233.157) -- Saturday, January 5 2008, 07:38 pm

Hope for a future

This writing does stand on its own without more.. I agree it sounds like the chorus more than a verse from a song.. But as a poetic statement it gives hope that one can move forward from a past of mistakes.. It is an enjoyable reading
Leah (24.78.52.116) -- Wednesday, May 28 2008, 04:01 am

Thanks

Thanx! I really appreciate the comment.
may (86.154.91.253) -- Tuesday, February 24 2009, 10:35 pm

simply beautiful

Just the right lift i need in my life right now, thank you.
 
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