Death Under A Blood Red Star
Author: Dija Abernathy
Bleeding to death,
i cant see,
take a breath,
cant seem to breath,
take a chance,
open my eyes,
at first glance,
am i dead or alive,
try to stand,
cant move at first,
on blood stained land,
dieing of thirst,
blood is clotting,
wont get to far,
my bodies rotting,
under a blood redstar.
------- Author's Notes -------
someone will read this with out understanding,wha do you think it means????
Comments on this poem/writing:
|mental (188.8.131.52) -- Wednesday, January 9 2008, 01:27 am|
|dija (184.108.40.206) -- Saturday, August 23 2008, 11:29 pm|
its a lot of reprecentation, what this persons goin threw, an image in ones mind,their own hell, it could be a lot of diffrent things to diffrent people, guess its just the way you look at it.
|LinzAy (220.127.116.11) -- Tuesday, August 26 2008, 05:57 am|
For me, this poem makes me feel trapped.
|dija abernathy (18.104.22.168) -- Monday, October 6 2008, 10:44 pm|
in a sence yes, to be traped in your own mind, in your own hell, no one knowing how you realy fill or not understanding ur pain, in some ways ur alone.
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