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March April May
4 May, 2008
Author: Puppet

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A butterfly flutters by,
Bringing with it Spring.
The desolate and the darkness
Shall have no chance to sing.

The poppies bloom, and frighten Gloom
With orange petal’s light,
As sky-high gulls give bleating cries
Which slip seamless to night.

Sound the sun in azul ink
And sound the summer’s heat;
My head’s a-buzz with honeyed winds
And flower’s bumble fleet.

------- Author's Notes -------

A poem I wrote after a butterfly landed on my knee!

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Comments on this poem/writing:

RED DRAGON (202.162.160.31) -- Sunday, May 4 2008, 12:27 am

A BREATH OF FRESH AIR

very descriptive...you work is very refershing... keep it up!!!!
Justin (132.28.253.225) -- Sunday, May 4 2008, 06:09 pm

Just what I needed.

Paints a nice picture. Excellent choice of words throughout, but "Sound the sun in azul ink", was definately my favorite.

I agree with Red Dragon, very refreshing.
Bipedalguy (65.96.237.196) -- Monday, May 5 2008, 01:30 am

Inspired me to mow my lawn !

Just kidding. That was a most beautiful write. It was a pleasure to read.
I couldn't find "azul" in my dictionary It's so-called "unabridged", but it's ancient. I associate "azul" with "azure". It seems to fit.
I was going to mow my lawn, but now I'm going to check your other writes. Keep it up. Your writing is outstanding.
Bipedalguy
Puppet (156.1.60.60) -- Monday, May 5 2008, 08:30 pm

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Thanks guys, I'm glad you enjoyed it. And Bipedalguy, azul is just blue in spanish, I was trying to find a blue that fit the rhythym. Huh, I guess azure would work just as well, that's probably what I had in mind.
Terrye* (67.187.237.233) -- Tuesday, May 6 2008, 01:28 am

vision you paint displays with such a light-------

Aww butterflies---heavens tiny Mystic Angels with fragile satin like wings, so tender--so shy---yet so brave to land upon a trusted friends knee..this was truly lovely--i enjoyed it--

Azul? one thing comes 2 mind --Azul Margarita = )
Justin (70.130.36.87) -- Tuesday, May 6 2008, 08:35 pm

Had to read it again.

I had to come back and read this again today. Such a great image in my head when I read this. Simply outstanding work.
 
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