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Mindful Travel
6 May, 2008
author: Rebecca Ditch-Hammack (aka Dreamer)

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seeping through the intelligence
to a different place
where the illogical rules
we dare to tread
slowly at first, so not to disturb the unrest

realizing even the illogical is based on logic
at some point
and each must co-exist
or neither would
in parallels we travel

embracing both realities
in our dreamlike state
our thoughts intertwine
with no beginning or end
where the edges blur into what we believe

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Terrye* (67.187.237.233) -- Wednesday, May 7 2008, 11:56 pm

Peaceful state of mind..

Becky,
your words are like a nutrition bar--
always offerin' our minds and soul,that sit down, relax type of atmosphere--

where-No thoughts ever go to waste---
your words create a peaceful journey within our minds of the good the bad and the ugly--
your precious words offer a wonderful fountain that quenches ones thirst-and feeds the mind--

enjoyed this!!!
barb (67.58.197.169) -- Sunday, May 11 2008, 06:17 pm

talented

You are very good with words. A nice read thank-you
 
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