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The Pain!
Author: Dino Hi

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Holding all this pain
I'm suffering to restrain
Why now? Why me?
Where are we? Where can it be?
Release this pain! So they'll be laughter
Moving fast, must move faster
So much pain! Like a burning rocket
Stop! Wait! There's one, a honey bucket

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Capricorn (62.30.192.1) -- Saturday, December 7 2002, 05:39 pm

not usual

This is not like your usual writing Dino, which is full of energy and optimism. I feel concerned for you as I read this. Hope your pain subsides soon.
The geezer (66.19.108.72) -- Saturday, December 7 2002, 07:28 pm

O-Oh?

Thank you very much for your comment and concern. I'm ok. Let me explain this poem. I've been using a honey bucket in construction, for over thirty-five years, I forgot, it's probably called something else all over the world,"out-house, nature's pot,etc." Driving down the road, I can always spot one, when I have to go. Stop! Wait! There's one, a honey bucket! Now it's a joke with us. It's ment for humor, to laugh at ourselves, and laughter is our best medicine. Thanks again, o-oh? I gotta go!
Capricorn (62.30.192.1) -- Saturday, December 7 2002, 11:05 pm

Good!

Haha!!-- I like it!! So glad I misunderstood Dino! I've never heard of the honey bucket before-- must remember that one!Yes, Laughter is a very good medicine, and I've had my medicine today...Haha!!
 
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