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Affection
11 May, 2008
Author: Sean

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Affection returns as a lonely lost stranger
With soft words that sing a familiar refrain
Yet I feel in my heart there is some hidden danger
Of giving my love to someone again.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Amy (74.141.19.254) -- Tuesday, May 20 2008, 05:27 pm

Exactly the way I feel...

I love this poem...it is exactly the way I feel right now.
LinzAy (72.189.15.210) -- Tuesday, May 20 2008, 09:56 pm

...

short and to, the beautiful sad, point. nice :)
Terrye* (67.187.237.233) -- Tuesday, May 20 2008, 11:12 pm

Powerful Reflection

a little when spoken from the heart says a-lot i totally agree w/LinzAy
barb (67.58.197.169) -- Wednesday, May 21 2008, 04:09 am

very nice I have some unwanted advice

Don't be afraid to share your heart and feelings again. You know the saying,If you fall get right back upand try again until you get it right.Keep trying and taking a chance.Don't keep all your gifts to yourself,That's being selfish don't you think ? Share yourself with someone show them your good traits ,share your love with someone.
 
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