Had A Dream
21 May, 2008
Author: LinzAy
I had a dream once
I really had a dream
I'd walk into roses
And be embraced
~Such warm arms
Beauty escaping smiles
Beauty escaping words
He surrounded me with candlelight
Romanced me with midnight dances
This song was mine
This song was ours
I had a dream once
And he was great
But I foolishly woke up
And my dream has disappeared
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Comments on this poem/writing:
| Terrye* (67.187.237.233) -- Wednesday, May 21 2008, 10:34 pm Don't you wish when we open up our eyes from a dream that life would become like an open book and continue where we left off? i can recall durin' a nap, i had a dream in that area-while the lyrics of Dreamin' w/a Broken Heart by John Mayer started playin' in the back ground, woke up, dream disappeared, yet the music continued. thanx 4 sharin' your dream. |
| LinzAy (71.41.115.197) -- Thursday, May 22 2008, 05:43 pm I just realized I end up referring to myself as a fool in a lot of my writing...just an observation. Anywho. He was a dream. Evanescence "And if I bleed, I'll bleed-knowing you don't care...and if I sleep just to dream of you-I'll wake without you there" Such a beautiful song......Thank you for your comment! I'm glad you enjoyed the poem :) |
| Ben (67.58.197.169) -- Thursday, May 22 2008, 10:13 pm Terrye recreate your dream .light candles in the bathroom put on soft music and have a relaxing bubble bath lay back relax and think of your dream.Nice write about your dream. |
| barb (67.58.197.169) -- Thursday, May 22 2008, 10:17 pm oh gosh terry I messed up too .I typed Ben instead of Barb the comment is from me Barb not Ben lol |
| barb (67.58.197.169) -- Thursday, May 22 2008, 10:22 pm Sorry Linsay I'm really screwed up ")))) I was thinking Terrye wrote this but it was you Linsay.Whoever did it.very good write.:)))) |
| LinzAy (71.41.115.197) -- Thursday, May 22 2008, 10:49 pm It's all good Barb! lol. thanks for the comment! Just so everyone knows...this dream was real. I had him and let him go like a fool. ah...boo. |
| barb (67.58.197.169) -- Thursday, May 22 2008, 11:19 pm Some day you'll talk it all out with him.At least you realised he was the one and you learned your lesson . He should be flattered that you know how perfect for you hewas |
| barb (67.58.197.169) -- Thursday, May 22 2008, 11:19 pm Some day you'll talk it all out with him.At least you realised he was the one and you learned your lesson . He should be flattered that you know how perfect for you hewas |
| LinzAy (72.189.15.210) -- Thursday, May 22 2008, 11:55 pm Thanks for the positive thoughts. I hope for that. But as my other poem states..."hope hurts" |
| Terrye* (67.187.237.233) -- Friday, May 23 2008, 12:52 am Quash your observation thoughts, young 'un your display of poetry is worth its weight in every soul. been there , done that... sheesh if that wasn't the case then "Hi meet another Fool" but 'aye we know thats not the case. sometimes sweetie, we wake up after our good chase is Gone.. through their absence we learn to appreciate them in million and one plus ways.. But still, God has a plan at times when someone leaves us , sometimes they may or may not return! sometimes our gift is someone different, either way instantaneously Magic follows afterward! Keep pennin' your thoughts they are true to the heart. |
| LinzAy (71.41.115.197) -- Friday, May 23 2008, 03:41 pm Thank you so much :) |
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