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Some Days
9 June, 2008
Author: Catyrose

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Some days innocence returns
He has a tendency to come and go
With him by my side, I become a child once again
Bubbling over with laughter at the silliest things

Some days my long lost friend
Melancholy pays a visit
She stays for a little while
Leaving me feeling old and tired, with no strength left to smile

Some days joy arrives and takes me by the hand
He wraps me up in his warmth
Lifting me up and setting me free
This blissful state brings out the best in me

Some days sorrow drops by
In her presence, I experience a sense of grief and fear
Reminding me of all the times my heart has been broken
As my eyes fill with tears

Some days love arrives
He fills me with hope
My life is full of wonder and delight
I see beauty all around, whenever love abounds

Some days peace calls on me
She chases away my pride and vanity
Providing the chance to make amends
To those I call my family and friends

Some days are better than others
Yet they provide a lesson you see
Each one has helped me to unravel life’s little mysteries
Today my heart is once again filled with a sense of compassion
For each and every person I meet

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Terrye* (67.187.237.233) -- Tuesday, June 10 2008, 10:05 am

It all comes back--

Caty, this is very reflective...
bein' optimistic, i prefer to be Unattainable to some of life's roller coaster emotions--BUT.. we at some point in our life's, we all face and battle death , heartbreaks etc. it seems their unwanted presence becomes a reflection that helps maintain the balance in one's life...God Never Gives us more than we can Handle..
you have a very unique talent in your writin' ability..keep it strong!!
barb (67.58.197.169) -- Tuesday, June 10 2008, 04:27 pm

good attitude caty

This write explains life so well ups and downs,good and bad kudo Caty.good attitude and good write. thanks for your thoughts
Bipedalguy (65.96.237.196) -- Tuesday, June 10 2008, 06:31 pm

A great write from a philosophical perspect ive.

I also noticed that, except for the last one, the good stuff was reserved for the him's and he's, while the ladies got the negative stuff.
You may soon have equal rights crusaders breathing down your neck. Be careful. L.O.L.
Keep up the good work.
Catyrose (128.123.85.27) -- Tuesday, June 10 2008, 07:22 pm

Thank you all very much

for your comments. They are most appreciated and mean a lot to me. OH, and BIPE I will be sure and watch that "gender" thing. Shame on me! And I consider myself a feminist!!! :)
 
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