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Burning
30 June, 2008
Author: Miztrebor

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I
am alone tonight
lost in my mind
scared to death of my thoughts

I
feel it building inside
the passion and the pain
how much longer will i last

I
am burning inside
with the rages of my life
have you come quell this fire

I
am sure that you come from love
sent out from within
you're my only/ hope to win

You
put out all the fire
leaving me with desire
can you stay awhile

You
you say you need to leave
but i plead and i plead
i know you are what i need

You
captured me with a smile
freezing me in my tracks
i want this/ moment to last

We
are locked together inside
the locks will never fade
our love shall never change

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Terrye* (67.187.237.233) -- Tuesday, July 1 2008, 02:35 pm

Nice-one whom completes ...

Beautiful!!! a desirin' flame...sounds like your describin' a soul-mate? the other half of a soul..the person whom makes a huge impact on ones life. not bein' w/them tears one apart.the very bein' whom has the ability to hurt and heal...they can be a blessin' and a curse..i love how your "i" "you" becomes "WE"...you are truly gifted with your words..
 
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