Should I Fall
Author: Mental


My emotions were in the dark
my eyes searched forever
to hit it's mark
should i fall?
the moonlight shimmered
like snow on the ground
my eyes, tears that glimmered
you can't be found.
did you fall?
let me hear you whisper
when you fall
let me catch you asleep
when you call.
let me hold your emotions
that used hide within
capture you rhythms so softly
fragile and so thin


Comments on this poem/writing:

Tarna ( -- Friday, January 9 2009, 04:20 pm

I like the feeling....

I like the feeling this one leaves with me.. Such a gentle tender feeling.
everett ( -- Monday, January 26 2009, 10:36 pm


This is a great poem, i really enjoyed the way you described your emotion! very nice...
rage ( -- Wednesday, September 11 2013, 09:34 pm


a soothing sounding poem ,nice
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