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From Dawn Til' Dusk
13 January, 2009
Author: Pamela O'Brien

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Get an early start, got early travel on my mind
Long drives are made much longer
When you leave something behind
Steering into warm sunrises, with the future on my mind……
Late nights spent lonely, when the silence is unkind
Darkness is made much darker
When you cannot tell the time
Turning into a spotlight for fears lurking in the mind……

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Tarna (75.24.292.432) -- Tuesday, January 13 2009, 06:11 pm

traveling

To me this seems like the person is leaving family behind without knowing when she will return.. Good things about writings they can mean something so different to who ever reads the writing.. I like it's melancholy feel..
Pamela (137.186.176.88) -- Tuesday, January 13 2009, 07:32 pm

Yes indeed.......

It is very melancholy, that feeling of leaving someone behind and nights spent alone thinking of them. I am glad you understood and could relate :)
 
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