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Beach-art Punk
25 January, 2009
Author: Puppet

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The first time I heard "Red Tape" by the Circle Jerks, I was raking huge, circular patterns on the beach sand. It was a project my neighbor Ty and I had been anticipating with relish, and we had agreed to devote two full hours to whatever drawing would emerge. And we were well on our way, when, as Ty and I were fixed on our beach art, Jacob (the biker guy who lived on the other side of the park from me) showed up with his ancient tape deck, and without so much as a greeting plopped down two feet from our design's perimeter and loaded one of his cassettes. What came out was the fastest punk song I'd heard. At first it seemed horribly alien to our Zen-like focus, but as the drums swirled at blistering speed and the shouting became less grating I found myself making enhanced drawings. What had first begun as a tentative, tip-toeing two-step became a mighty dance and violent duel with the symbol in the sand. A mysterious emblem of gashes and rake lines and stamped-down footsteps was taking over the minimalist original. In the final seconds of our onslaught, Jacob jumped up and cheered us on. The song ended right as I swung my last slash, spraying sand across the middle of the design, which looked like the frozen explosion of a galaxy. Finished, I collapsed and immediately fell asleep for a dreamless twenty minutes. When I awoke, the entire beach was deserted; even Ty and Jacob (and his cassette player)were gone. So I promptly urinated on the sand design, picked up my cast-aside rake, and lazily made my way back home.

------- Author's Notes -------

A short-short story about the nature of artistic creation.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Tarna (75.14.215.82) -- Sunday, January 25 2009, 05:29 pm

interesting art

I liked reading about the creation of art, though your form made it a bit hard to read. (Run on sentences without any line breaks) It also seems to show the frenzy for the creation of the art with the music leading the way. So it seems to have a reason.
Aside from that, watching from your words, the creation of the sand art morph to the music's design was true. I have watched art take on a life of its own as it is being created. The artists lack of respect or careless thought for his own work was a bit disheartening at the end.

I liked the wording of this work as a whole. Kept me there watching till the end.
Puppet (67.160.229.176) -- Tuesday, January 27 2009, 02:47 am

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Thanks for the comment! I felt the sentences reflected, like you said, the "frenzy" of the music, and so the form became less of a priority when I began to describe the artistic shift.

Also, the ending is simply there to drive home the point that true beauty is in the creation, not the preservation, of art.
anonymous (74.65.121.49) -- Tuesday, January 27 2009, 10:21 am

you WHAT!??

You URINATED... on a public beach!?? Whether you did or it's just part of the writing, that's just gross, man. You don't just take out your doolie and take a whiz on a public beach, man... that just stinks like the smell of your whiz would stink. Thanks for taking something that was getting interesting and peeing all over it.
Puppet (147.144.66.221) -- Tuesday, January 27 2009, 08:15 pm

lol

Dude, it's just a story! But if it makes you feel any better, the waves washed it away.
LinzAy (71.43.163.83) -- Friday, February 6 2009, 12:58 am

puppet

Awesome response to anon....but i also liked the poem a lot!
 
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