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Passion's Song
8 February, 2009
Author: Miztrebor

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Laying here with you
No covering to hide behind
My arms engulfing your body
As your arms engulf mine
Legs intertwined
I don’t know where your body ends
And mine begins to start
It is in this embrace that
We take a bite of the forbidden fruit
Knowledge of good and evil
Everyone knows of this
It is the knowledge of Love
That has been begotten
Laying here intertwined
Feeling the build up of heat
A melody erupts from passion
Our heart strings vibrating together
This is the song I’ve been trying to tame
And failed at for so long
You cannot capture the Love
No, not in the beat of a song
Only in the throbbing of hearts
No machine can make its equal
Here we have made Love
Here we have bonded eternally
Listen to out song
It shall never be forgotten
Laying here with you
Holding onto you
Hearing you breathe
Looking into your soul
With eyes that have been closed
But opened all the same

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Princess Moon (24.167.67.105) -- Monday, February 23 2009, 06:13 am

Awesome passion...

Awesome poem, Miztrebor; I loved it! I really loved the lines " I don't know where your body ends/ And mine begins to start" Pure Poetry! Very good, I love to read poems like this that don't need so much analyzing...it can just flow even to a new reader! Great work!!
Colin (69.157.13.45) -- Monday, February 23 2009, 07:17 am

cold shower!

after reading such 'passion' I need to take a cold shower!
 
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