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Open Your Eyes
Author: Emery

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In a life of corruption and misery
I find a piece of tranquility.
In a moment of abandonment and anguish
I find a hope of loving and compassion.
In a flash of torture and affliction
I find a second to breathe and reflect upon life.
In a glace of a world so different and divided
I can find friendship and hope.
In a bit of anger and rage
I find a way to open my eyes and see the other side.
What can you find?

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Comments on this poem/writing:

everett (32.176.99.87) -- Monday, March 9 2009, 04:41 am

eyes open

great poem! so true, so much corruption and misery, its great to see the other side.
LinzAy (71.43.163.83) -- Monday, March 9 2009, 04:50 pm

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Like how it ends with a question-kind of like a challenge...good job :)
 
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