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In A Perfect World
Author: Barbara Goodhew

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People would be considerate.
We would be kind and to others not berate.

Thinking of the feelings of others before we speak,
Not saying things that make others feel meek.

Love out of caring and understanding.
Not out of lust or conquest.

This isn't a perfect world.

WISH IT WAS.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Colin (69.157.9.183) -- Sunday, June 14 2009, 10:40 pm

I like the way you think...

I like the way you think - I love the way you write!
barb (67.58.197.120) -- Sunday, June 14 2009, 11:05 pm

thank-you very much

Some have told me my thinking is strange,thanks for liking my thinking.
LinzAy (71.43.163.82) -- Monday, June 15 2009, 02:18 pm

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I feel this poem completely. Nice one. There are so many other things that could make this world perfect too.....you may have just inspired me :)
barb (67.58.197.120) -- Tuesday, June 16 2009, 12:11 am

thanks for reading

Go for it LinzAy. Do your thing in great writing, Whatever you think would help make thisa perfect world write about it in that special way that you do.
 
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