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Blood Sucking Creatures:)
Author: Mona

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I hear shrill screams
& Realize they are my dreams
I see the nightmares of others too
The ability just out of blue
I am a blood-sucking creature
I kill my victim, the great hunting teacher
An immortal too
How I became a vampire I have no clue
Our Family of vampire's, Dad and Mom
Another who lives with me, named Tom
Tom has a friend named Sy
He is a great friend I just go OH MY
He is a great vampire too
And if you bother him he kills you
He is a great friend of mine
And with type blood O he is fine
Most vampires love blood O
If you ask Sy for a favor he never say “NO”
He is a fast hunter, but he ask for my help though
Cause I am on old one and I never say no
I love SY for being so great
He is my friend and calls me his mate
He is a great friend of mine
We have known each other since I was nine
He is a caring friend, was one from the beginning
And I want our friendship to never end!

------- Author's Notes -------

hi:) I wrote this poem today and I truely want to know hat you guys think of it:) thanks:)

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Colin (69.157.5.69) -- Wednesday, July 15 2009, 04:54 pm

If Dr. Seuss wrote 'horror' or favored....

If Dr. Seuss wrote 'horror' or favored the macabre
then "Blood sucking creatures" would be one of his best-sellers!!! You have a similar writing style to mine in which you can deftly walk a fine line between horror and humor!
 
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