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Mr. Right Turms Out To Be Mr.wrong
15 November, 2009
Author: Barbara Goodhew

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What I thought was true words.
Were words said to all.
I misunderstood what I thought was sincere.

Thinking I found my prince.
Instead an experienced bull frog.

AGAIN MR. RIGHT TURNED OUT TO BE MR. WRONG.

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Meridian (108.26.72.114) -- Saturday, February 19 2011, 05:54 am

this is so funny

"...Instead an experienced bull frog," makes me think of the frog on Shrek. You know, the King of Far Far Away that's actually a frog.

Love the humor in that line.
Meridian (108.26.72.114) -- Saturday, February 19 2011, 05:58 am

don't get me wrong

Not the entire poem, just that line.

Thought I had to come back up here and clarify myself. From time to time I tend to think that some things I write are implied and that explanation is unnecessary, which is, most often than not, a terrible mistake.
Good men are all around you (74.67.87.64) -- Monday, February 21 2011, 02:21 pm

Good Luck

Mr. Right is usually your friend who would do anything for you. That guy who listens to your relationship troubles. You know that guy who would give you his kidney that's him your diamond in the rough
 
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