Can You Hear Me Mommy
Author: Marilyn A F Longfellow


Can You Hear Me Mommy?
I'm here by your side.
Remembering all you did for us.
Your family was your pride.
Can You Hear Me Mommy??
They say "Just Reminisce".
But what I want to say,
Please remember this.
When you meet our Saviour.
He will know very well.
For I've prayed and talked to Him
About you for awhile.
Just say Hello!
Angels He will send.
They'll reach right down,
And help you in.
Can You Hear Me Mommy"
I just can't say Goodbye.
Stay here as long as you can.
Then I'll just kiss you Mother


Comments on this poem/writing:

P K Padhy ( -- Friday, November 27 2009, 03:42 am

A touching and emotional expression

It is a tribute to the most respected Mother.
The poem revives the sacred relationship with ones mother.
Dr P K Padhy, India
Terrie* ( -- Sunday, September 29 2013, 06:22 am

Thumbs Up !"!

Hi Marilyn,
beauty is the Art if your words... I hope you're still composon' your brilliant work!! Iv always admired your work..a Longfellow always earns my Attention...Thumbs
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