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Living For Dream?
7 December, 2009
Author: Mike

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It must be amazing,
To live for the day.
The moment.

The Now.

To be spontaneous.
Impulsive.

No plans, no worries.
Doing as you please,
When you please.

Living the dream.

How could it be that I have no future?
That I can't see past the end of the week,
The end of the day?

How is it that I've come to this?
No plans, no emotion,
No life.

You want to see me next week?
I'll let you know.

Oh, its your birthday in two?
I'll let you know.

Is it normal to celebrate a normal weekend?
To go out and party like it might be your last?

Surely not.

It must be amazing,
To live for the day.
The moment.

The Now.

To be spontaneous.
Impulsive.

No plans, no worries.
Doing as you please,
When you please.

Living the dream.

------- Author's Notes -------

I've filed this under 'Depression', but I'm not sure if that's fitting. I don't feel depressed, I don't seem depressed. I just know that I have no future.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

barb (67.58.197.120) -- Wednesday, December 9 2009, 04:50 pm

Sad but perfect writing

We all have a future Mike,it might not be as exciting as we like but even tomorrow is our future,anything could happen.
COLIN (69.157.9.82) -- Wednesday, December 9 2009, 07:09 pm

yes Barb is right......

the word 'hope' is vital in everyone's lives no matter who you are and what you do ... remember that song from the musical ANNIE - "Tomorrow" - well that must the theme song for the human race!
On a literary/poetic note - this is a brilliant piece of writing and for that you must be proud!
You have moved me Mike (and Barb too!
Meridian (205.188.116.135) -- Thursday, December 10 2009, 05:20 am

Your future is

To be a writer, so that I can pick up that bestseller when it comes out. But, whatever you aspire to do, I know that when you add in determination, there's always something great in store.

Chin up Mike! Proceed through the green light, set those ambitions and don't stop until you've reached your destination!
Mike (94.170.127.14) -- Saturday, December 12 2009, 05:21 pm

..

Bah Dreamer! You didn't separate the sections =[
and uh, thanks for the comments. I can't really comment back without.. i dunno. getting all mixed up and confused in my explanations.

See?
Meridian (64.12.117.71) -- Monday, December 14 2009, 06:29 pm

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