vinebar

Brother Death
26 May, 2010
author: Rebecca Ditch-Hammack (aka Dreamer)

vinebar

Oh Brother Death
How I long to walk beside you
In your arms I know I will find peace
I follow the paths you have laid before me
Overwhelmed by emotions that follow
I succumb to the inevitable

Oh Brother Death
I will not lay down for you
Though I know one day it will come
When my lessons are finished
The paths finally end
Only then, will I talk with you again

vinebar

Comments on this poem/writing:

Meri (205.188.116.135) -- Thursday, July 21 2011, 08:09 pm

nice poem

Creative how you personify death. The last stanza is a great way to finish the poem.
Becky (75.16.237.232) -- Thursday, July 21 2011, 08:27 pm

thanks Meri

I was in an odd mood that day and as on most odd days this one wrote itself.... Glad you liked it.
 
Name:                                           Remember Me

Comment Title:

Comment / Ammendment:

Please complete the recaptcha below for spam prevention:

Click here to read other Poems by Dreamer

vinebar

Poetic Dreams Next Back Submit a Poem New This Week Home

Copyright © 2018-1999 by Rebecca R. Hammack
All rights reserved. No poetry on this website maybe used or reproduced in any manner without written permission of the publisher.
For release information please e-mail dreamer@dreamersreality.com