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The Hell Inside
Author: Carny

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Soulless people roam the world looking for the weak,
We all know them they prey, They sneak,
Looking into there eyes you see an abyss,
Something is not right in this,
I look to my left and I see a large flame,
I look to my right and see the devil dancing in crimson rain,
Is this hell I'm in?
Or are these images coming from within?
We all have a hell inside of us all,
Some people can conquer while some people fall,
The ones that spread hate, are dancing with the devil,
While the pure of heart, are on an enlightened level,
With Amara at my side, I can no longer dance with him,
Forever my soul will stay pure, Forever I will grin,
I still battle with my own hell,
But I will not give in to the dark angels that fell...

------- Author's Notes -------

Amara (those of you who read any of my other poems know who she is) wanted me to write a darker style poem like i used to before we started dating, but i didn't wanna make it a depressing on, so i came up with this, please comment
Much Love everybody, To all you writers out there, no poem is a bad poem, Write whats in your heart and you cant go wrong,
~sincerely Carny~

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Baby Brat (24.105.224.102) -- Monday, September 27 2010, 11:53 pm

WOW

Hey Carny wow I love this poem!!!
 
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