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Crazy
7 January, 2003
Author: Donna

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I'm crazy about you
I want you to know I love you
If you don't love me
Cause of what you see
I won't care cuz this is me
But if you do love me
I will love you back
And in my eyes you will see
I am not a fool
But I know i'm crazy about you
And I'm not lying,I'm being true!

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Martin Vann (65.56.172.232) -- Tuesday, January 14 2003, 11:32 pm

Good for You!

You have the inner strength, so many others lack, if this relationship does not work out, the other will just move on. However, you, will feel no lasting pain. I think, you have been here more than once. Continue to be true to yourself, for what you have, I call a treasuer. The day when will come when things will change, and beleive it or not, YOU will decide, which one to will choose!

This is how I felt "your words," sorry if, I was wrong, I see your heart, its beautiful.

Thank you for sharing, this private part of you.
Luc (67.36.185.11) -- Wednesday, January 15 2003, 05:42 am


0.o that last part of that comment rymed.. spelled that right? heh.. well yeah i really agree with martin on this one.. it was a good poem.. and like him.. thanks for sharing ... heh that reminded me of the aaa mettings o.0 erm uh yeah...
Andrea (168.9.19.101) -- Tuesday, May 16 2006, 08:02 pm

Nice

That was awsome and keep writing
 
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