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Friends Or Not
28 December, 2002
Author: Donna

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Are we friends or not?
Your about all i've got
If i'm not ur friend
Don't worry about me,cuz itz not the end
I've known u so long
But our friendship was wrong
I wish I was your friend
Even past the end
But now that i know
U hate me as your foe
It was fun being friends
I didn't know why it had to end
For no apparent reason,U said u hated me
I didn't know why this had to be
Now that our friendship is through
I have one thing to say,I will remember U

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Luc (67.37.226.67) -- Sunday, January 5 2003, 02:27 am


never hold a grudge.. i know how ya feel.. diffietnly can relate to that... nice writing...
Seizure (65.164.72.2) -- Monday, January 6 2003, 08:34 pm

liked the message

The first two and last two lines are both very powerful. I felt those... good job.
Donna (68.48.86.160) -- Tuesday, January 7 2003, 10:49 pm

Thx seizure

Thx a lot,but i LOVE your poems like crazy,i know how you feel and thatz me right now,i'm only 12 but i feel how you feel,i mean my mom and all isn't like urs,very bad,i hope you feel well and keep writing,u've inspired me,thank you very much
Donna (68.48.86.160) -- Tuesday, January 7 2003, 10:51 pm

ty luc

Luc,i know how ya feel,but thx and i hope that doesn't happen much,but i mean i had moved from my friends and where i used to live,i lived there for 12 long precious years ,then i had to move,thatz when my life went downward somewhat like seizures and i feel like seizure,i know how he feels ,and this girl named candie i've known almost my whole life,just started to ignore me on the computer and she had no reason,she said she hated me for no reason,so this is what i write...ty
 
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