Public Servant (revised)
Black man, white man, no matter the hue,
Hindu and Moslem, Christian and Jew.
God made these and all others,
and all men would be brothers,
had he not made politicians too.
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An alternate title for this Limerick might be
Comments on this poem/writing:
|Meridian (220.127.116.11) -- Saturday, February 19 2011, 04:51 am|
Love it Bipe. So true.
|Bipedalguy (18.104.22.168) -- Sunday, February 20 2011, 06:29 pm|
Thanks for the kind comment re "Public Servant"
Best Regards, Bipedalguy"
|Becky (22.214.171.124) -- Sunday, February 20 2011, 10:59 pm|
This is a great limerick. I love the message it has too... good work
|Bipedalguy (126.96.36.199) -- Monday, February 21 2011, 05:25 pm|
Thanks for reading it and I'm glad you liked it.
Cheers, Don (Bipedalguy)
|Ing Twi Demalah (188.8.131.52) -- Friday, September 9 2011, 05:08 pm|
This is perfect, and excellent write. Keep if up my friend.
|Bipedalguy (Donald Crowell) (184.108.40.206) -- Sunday, September 11 2011, 11:20 pm|
I remain overwhelmed by some of your writes, "The Chase" is one of the best. "The red Tiger" is truly exceptional. i.e "He loved her, this she knew, and did softly in his ear confess that she did love him too. (too good)
|Ing Twi Demalah (220.127.116.11) -- Saturday, September 24 2011, 12:06 pm|
After all my poetic friend, when we poets cease our writing; then dreamers stop dreaming and lover start crying. Keep writing my friend.
|Terrie* (18.104.22.168) -- Tuesday, October 18 2011, 06:20 pm|
A well composed Master piece with a High Rank..
I soooo Love the message delivered!!
|Bipedalguy (Donald Crowell) (22.214.171.124) -- Saturday, October 29 2011, 03:19 am|
Thanks for your kind words re Public Servant(Revised).
I'm afraid it really needed revision.
I haven't written much in the last couple of years. I don't think I'm sufficiently depressed for good writing. I'm on an additional site now. It's a much larger site, and is highly automated.
This one's still my favorite. It's more personal.
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