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Fear Of Others Thoughts
4 March, 2011
Author: tommyg

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Presence in fear
Thoughts hang in balance
Not knowing
What will come next

My spirit in the air
Their spirit meeting mine
It is there squirming
Intestinal fortitude in confusion

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Tarna (22.14.270.191) -- Saturday, March 5 2011, 09:21 pm

picturesque

this one actually brings a picture to mind. I can almost see the colored fog auras mingling.. good write
tommyg (69.204.221.248) -- Thursday, March 10 2011, 06:05 am

thank you

I am glad I make sense to someone on this planet;. My existance is misuderstandingly constant. My language is different and all my own its good to have a translator. thank you for your nice compliments they relieve me of my distraught existance
 
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