Standing Still
Author: fffraaanziii


Now you're standing there
with the pain in your bones,
the memories as scares,
the right plan in your head,
the banned conscience hovering over you
and the mistake in your hands.
With the past in your heart
and the future within your reach.
With no idea where to put the next step
and not the slightest clue what to do.

------- Author's Notes -------

Everyone knows the moments where you just not know what to do. Whether it's because of love or a big change in life, everyone has to cope with those situations sometime in life.


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anonymous ( -- Saturday, March 19 2011, 06:22 am

Still and tears

Reminds me of that very old man sitting still. His hands covering his face, and you can see the pain all around him. He just lost everything, his whole generations of of his own family, and now he is all alone, praying, with nothing left to live for. That picture of that old Japanese man will stay with me forever. His love ones gone and faces an instant change in life.
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