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The Akua, Spirit Of Fire
12 June, 2011
Author: Dino Hi

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The gate keeper watches, as he drops down
Into the firery, Valley of Fire
An explosion of gas, evaporating his body
Turning his body, into a evaporating spirit
Destroyer of the aina land, the Akua of Fire
He will destroy, all things laying dead
Yet through his destruction, comes new life
Like a tree scarred, giving it tensile strength
The iron wood trees, becomes tempered steel
Through the black burnt ashes, new green sprouts
The Akua, spirit of fire dies away

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Meri (108.26.105.131) -- Monday, June 13 2011, 07:57 am

For some reason

I see a volcano in this one. I could be wrong. But great use of images Dino.
Dino (216.160.109.198) -- Wednesday, June 15 2011, 01:32 am

Hi Meri

Thanks for the comment! Yes, it could be a volcano? You'd be surprise, but I got the inspiration from a over expose photo. I was coming down this steep hill into a valley, with my dirtbike. The photo looked like I was coming down into a valley of fire. My gas tank exploded as well as I. Ha,ha---Thanks!
 
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