Author: Barbara Goodhew
Perfection is phoney.
Imperfection is real.
Perfection earns us money.
Imperfection earns us love.
No one wants to be around perfection.
When we are imperfect others show affection.
Depends on what we want.
Perfection--- phoney and rich
Imperfection----real and poor.
------- Author's Notes -------
Wrote this after reading a comment on my spelling. Wat yu tallking about missteaks in speling Hha Ha
Comments on this poem/writing:
|Meridian (184.108.40.206) -- Tuesday, March 23 2004, 03:42 pm|
Barbara Goodhew, you've did it again! Your poem "Perfection" is nicely written! I like the way you write your poetry as a life learned lesson! It's kind of like "watch out" or "beware" Pefection may not be the best thing! I really, looooooooooove it Mrs. Goodhew! Keep up the outstanding work!
Hip, hip, hooray!, hip, hip, hooray!
|Capricorn (220.127.116.11) -- Tuesday, March 23 2004, 05:05 pm|
I agreee with Meridian ... your poetry always teaches a lesson. Perfection ... well who is perfect I'm certainly not ...ha ha!! A thought provoking poem.
|cap and meridan (18.104.22.168) -- Tuesday, March 23 2004, 10:33 pm|
good thing I'm not perfect or I would of written this lol:)
|barb (22.214.171.124) -- Wednesday, March 24 2004, 04:15 pm|
the last line it is suppose to be would'nt oh well did you get my drift anyways:)))
|Terrie* (126.96.36.199) -- Friday, March 26 2004, 08:55 pm|
i admire all your work especially this one...you have a light about your work and i truely admire them all...as we type we all at some point omit a letter or two..i know i do..so what else is new? even the best journalist do it every so often ...thank you for your honest work...imperfection is also HONEST.
I for one know that..."I'm perfectly aware that I AM IMPERFECT " heh.. keep sharing sweetie..i love reading your work..have a good Day & God Bless!!! Terrie*
|barb (188.8.131.52) -- Friday, March 26 2004, 09:14 pm|
It's is easy for me to be imperfect, no stress that way.lol :)))
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