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Face Book Flashback
Author: Capricorn

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I login ...
searching for familiar faces,
without success

until Ö

no photos shown
but it must be him.

Grad School:
University of Sheffield
Metallurgy
Status:
Married

Memories tingle.

That college disco --
the band sang 'Letís Dance'
I felt a feather-touch
on my shoulder.

'Dance with me?'

He was a young Paul McCartney
but sandy haired,
his dark suit was enhanced
with a narrow neon tie.

We twisted Ö jived,
our eyes writing
love notes to each other,
until the music slowed
'Canít Take my Eyes off You'
we embraced in rhythm
'Sealed with a Kiss.'

Romance only whispered,
because he wasnít free
but letters still sit
in the rose printed-chocolate box
tucked at the back
of my overflowing wardrobe.

I flush, remembering
him feed me
Turkish Delights,
lips mouthing
frisky fingertips.

I wonít friend him --
he might not want
to be reminded and
delete me.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Meri (108.26.82.140) -- Sunday, December 25 2011, 02:31 am

Wow...amazing write

Love the wording of the poem. Like how you open up the poem and end it. Very good.
Capricorn (82.46.181.243) -- Sunday, December 25 2011, 10:31 pm

Thanks!

Thank you Meri - hope you're having a great Xmas
Ben Alan franklin (31.77.191.49) -- Wednesday, December 28 2011, 12:26 am

Hi

"our eyes writing love notes to each other"....love it!
Capricorn (82.46.181.243) -- Sunday, January 1 2012, 10:17 am

Hi there

thank you Ben, so glad you like that line. (a moment of inspiration!)
c (71.68.206.10) -- Thursday, January 5 2012, 08:00 pm

really!

i saw somebody to on facebook i'm not on facebook but just saw a picture of her on what the site lets you see it was her for sure those eyes gave her away. after seeing that all kinds of memories came back. i still have a pair of sunglasses from her from 1986 i'll give them back if i ever see her again . good write thank you
Capricorn (82.46.181.243) -- Friday, January 6 2012, 12:57 pm

join face book!

I'd join face book then you can arrange to meet & give her sunglasses back! Good luck!
 
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