To The Moon
26 April, 2003
Author: Elizabetta
Fickle friend are you indeed,
who so willingly share your light with me
Then in no more that a single day
into a sliver, fade away.
You who hang just so low in the sky
as to seem with in grasp, to my naieve eye
yet so high you swim in the midnight sea
when I cannot reach, a fool you make of me
How proud you seem to be
teasing and tempting me
but in that empty, sable sky
you must be just as lonely as I
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Comments on this poem/writing:
| CrYsTaL (204.31.225.15) -- Tuesday, April 29 2003, 02:29 am You really caught my eye with this one, Elizabetta. I really enjoyed this poem, because it talks about my most favorite thing in the world...the moon. Hope you write some more. Loved it! |
| Elizabetta (198.81.26.110) -- Tuesday, April 29 2003, 05:08 am Thanks for your comment. I really love the moon to. So many nights I have laid out on my driveway basking in its beams and found myself overtaken by a poem! Don't think I would write much at all without it! |
| Justus Isaiah Richardson (152.163.189.167) -- Wednesday, April 30 2003, 03:17 am A friend of mine wrote in the chorus of a song: When you're looking at the moon, I'll be looking too, Thinking of you. It's the same moon that I see, Shining on you Do you think of me, When you're looking at the moon. I believe the moon is the least lonely icon in creation. As long as people such as yourself and my friend Mark can draw so much emotion and so much romance from it. Not even the sun has inspired as much as that ever faithful friend we call the moon. Justus |
| Pamela (137.186.176.88) -- Tuesday, January 13 2009, 09:32 am I love this conversation with the moon. There is so much intimacy in it...... |
| Meri (173.94.251.136) -- Saturday, November 10 2018, 06:06 am Great poem. |
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