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The Perfect Friend
15 October, 2013
Author: Shannen Wrass

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Today I found a friend
Who knew everything I felt
She knew my every weakness
And the problems I’ve been dealt
She understood my wonders
And listened to my dreams
She listened to how I felt about life and love
And knew what it all means
Not once did she interrupt me
Or tell me I was wrong
She understood what I was going through
And promised she'd stay long
I reached out to this friend
To show her that I care
To pull her close and let her know
How much I need her there
I went to hold her hand
To pull her a bit nearer
And I realized this perfect friend I found
Was nothing but a mirror

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Meri (98.166.166.68) -- Tuesday, October 15 2013, 04:59 pm

Nice ending

Loved the twist at the end. Thought you were talking about another person. Enjoyed reading this.
Terrie* (98.239.78.217) -- Wednesday, October 16 2013, 06:45 am

WOW!

Profound!
Remarkaby Profound!
and beautifully composed piece....
we are our best friends..
A knock out presentation to bring it into focus..
I agree w/Sweet Meri....had me goin' there for a moment...then I continued readin'....
and I found myself sayin' ahhhh (=
 
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