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Immersion
Author: Elizabetta

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glistening
deep, knowing
calmly running
steady streams

then swirling circles
raging waves
violently tossing
stormy lakes

I want to dive
swim gracefully
float in the leisure they afford
even to drown
far better than
parched, dry
in the dark
kept out of their
inviting darkness
I want to glisten
be moist, damp
soaked
I'll dive in,
free fall
leave land behind
no hesitation
I'll dive in
just let me in
the raging seas
calm ponds
SEE ME!

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Comments on this poem/writing:

lasohnda harris (12.229.199.53) -- Thursday, February 27 2003, 10:58 am

nicce poem

nice poem the way you put it
Dragonsinger (216.18.141.151) -- Wednesday, December 10 2003, 01:58 am

Soooo true

I am so there with you girlfriend! Some people may not get this poem but i think i understand it perfectly. great style, keep up the good work!
 
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