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You Were My Last Thought
7 August, 2002
Author: Em

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Unmoving shadows in the darkness,
watch my every desperate attemped.
Taking the inspiration in to my own hand,
and dragging across the friction,
It's satisfaction seeing the carpet dripped red.
The pain is nausiating.
I'm so sorry to bring tears to your eyes,
as I feel myself slipping away your me thought,
as they have been for as long as I can remember.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Luc (12.84.4.142) -- Tuesday, September 17 2002, 09:39 pm

speechless

.......... ~*claps*~
Angela (209.32.85.143) -- Friday, March 14 2003, 04:06 am

great

you remind me of me i write many poems abotu cutting i've written 312. but im' usually too scared to share. luv always
Sara (24.222.101.11) -- Saturday, April 5 2003, 12:59 am

WOW!

Thsi poem is full of so much emmotion it's unbelievable! i started crying!
Angel (24.222.101.11) -- Saturday, April 5 2003, 01:00 am

awesome

I'm pretty much speechless....just...wow!
amanda steder (207.14.78.121) -- Friday, November 7 2003, 05:42 pm

i am a cutter too

i know how you feel. i am a cutter too, and went to wmhi to get help. im 14 years old, and live in a life of pain.(snip)g2g,
email me
amanda
Em (203.87.45.209) -- Tuesday, August 31 2004, 09:01 am

Hey

Hey Guys, thnx heaps 4 ur msgs... I think it's really special 4 ppl to connect wit what i'm writing about... I hope things turn out better for you Amanda, because it will soon turn in to regret if you are not careful xo xo
Anna (198.81.26.73) -- Thursday, December 16 2004, 04:15 am

Wow.... me too

I feel the same way ,i cut and i feel your pain and wonder why
 
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