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Deep Down
7 August, 2003
Author: Eric Miller

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Deep down I think I knew,
After all it was only sh*t you were puttin me through.

Did you even know my name,
Or did you just use like you do?
F*ck that, I'm done,
I won't take anymore of this sh*t from you.
Why'd you go and do this,
To the one person who actually cared?
You played me like you usually get played,
Just to see how well I faired!

I've turned into something I hate,
Now I feel like I'm nothin but a b*tch.
I threw myself in the open for you,
I thought that would cure your little itch.

But I guess it wasn't enough for you,
That you had someone else's heart in your hand.
You just tossed it to the ground,
With no worries of where or how it would land.

But this is the kind of stuff I've learned to deal with,
This kind of sh*t happens to me each and everyday.
So why is this time any different,
Shouldn't I be just fine, I wish I could say.

All I can think of is your lying face,
As I toss my body off of the ledge.
Just another pawn in your game,
You didn't think it was enough to push someone off life's edge.

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Jessisca (205.188.209.37) -- Thursday, August 14 2003, 02:23 am

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hey, I really like your poem and i can really relate to this right now. Me and this guy had this thing going on for about a year and that's exactly how i feel.he had other girls on the side.Thanks.. it made me realize that i really shouldn't put up with his s**t.
Britney (70.96.207.95) -- Wednesday, March 23 2005, 12:49 am

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I have a friend that is going threw this right now. I wanna cry her tears and have her hate. ~Britney~
 
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