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Sorry I Wasted Your Time
10 May, 2003
Author: Eric Miller

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They say, "What doesn't kill you
Only makes you stronger."
But they were all wrong.
I can't take it any longer.

I do everything wrong,
Not one single thing right.
As I lie on my bed
Knowing this is my last night.

Too much pain...
Without a will.
I will leave this place.
And give it to someone that doesn't make you ill.

I'm sorry I didn't please you
And never made you glad.
I apologize for taking up your time,
And for always making you mad.

I tried everything I could,
But I can't try anymore...
My life's a mess.
It's like one never-ending war.

My life's at its end
Yours will only improve.
Don't say a word,
I wouldn't want you to move.

So, to anyone out there,
Not that you even care,
Try to find out...
Why God made my time here so unfair.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Leah06 (12.232.5.189) -- Thursday, May 15 2003, 04:59 am

To answer your question...

To answer your question would be wrong because i dont exactly know. I do know that this poem is awsome and to make my time fair i would like you to write more and keep posting them. Pluse doing so will get rid of your time. Great poem! I hope to read more of them soon!!!!


Leah
CrYsTaL (216.63.217.252) -- Thursday, May 15 2003, 06:04 pm

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Agree! Great writing, you should post more of them.
LinzAy (64.12.96.40) -- Thursday, May 15 2003, 11:21 pm

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I don't have an answer for you...only a comment, sorry!

Good writing Eric :)
luc (68.74.76.79) -- Friday, May 16 2003, 02:33 am

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he makes everyones time unfair.. just some turn the tables on him and make him feel unfair.. heh just kidding.. anyways love the poem.. just rymes.. and the topic too.. i like it very much.. keep on writng :)
 
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