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11:28pm
Author: Shiloh

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11:28 pm…

In just a couple minutes
more than a half hour,
this day will be over with,
and tomorrow will be here.
This day,
the last 23 hours and 32 minutes of it,
is lost now.
What has it done for you?
What have you done with it?
Think about that....

and try not to cry.

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shiloh (66.24.75.179) -- Sunday, October 1 2017, 06:43 am

minutes are wrong

the line with 58 minutes, line 6, should have it writen as 28 minutes. sorry.
shiloh (66.24.75.179) -- Sunday, October 1 2017, 10:02 pm

minutes are wrong

WHOA!!!!
NO, NO, EVEN THAT IS WRONG!
IT SHOULD HAVE BEEN WRITTEN AS 32, which would be the remaining portion of the hour with 28 minutes gone from it. Gah.... I am SO damn ????
shiloh (66.24.75.179) -- Monday, October 2 2017, 05:33 pm

thank you

thank you, Becky, for the correction.
~peace...
 
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