In just a couple minutes
more than a half hour,
this day will be over with,
and tomorrow will be here.
the last 23 hours and 32 minutes of it,
is lost now.
What has it done for you?
What have you done with it?
Think about that....
and try not to cry.
Comments on this poem/writing:
|shiloh (184.108.40.206) -- Sunday, October 1 2017, 06:43 am|
the line with 58 minutes, line 6, should have it writen as 28 minutes. sorry.
|shiloh (220.127.116.11) -- Sunday, October 1 2017, 10:02 pm|
NO, NO, EVEN THAT IS WRONG!
IT SHOULD HAVE BEEN WRITTEN AS 32, which would be the remaining portion of the hour with 28 minutes gone from it. Gah.... I am SO damn ????
|shiloh (18.104.22.168) -- Monday, October 2 2017, 05:33 pm|
thank you, Becky, for the correction.
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