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From Above
Author: Everett

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Stitch up my bleeding heart.
Your faith is what kept me from falling apart.
Cover my scars with one look up to the stars.
With a simple touch, I can feel the words you say with silence.

I can't explain to you how i feel.
I will try if you help me heal.
Carve messages through the night.
Whisper a sigh that lets me know everything is alright.

Embrace me and tell me if you are real.
I can see a silhouette in my dreams.
Through all the screams and all the shadows, i see a gleam of light.
A beautful site to see for these blackened eyes.

If I listen carefully i can hear the angel's sing.
I search the skies just for a glimpse of your wings

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Meridian (152.163.253.7) -- Monday, March 1 2004, 06:24 pm

Inspiring

This poem is excelente! Healing and spirituality; this piece of writing is so divine! I hope you won't stop here though, because your poem is very inspiring and so very deep.
everett (209.240.207.249) -- Monday, March 1 2004, 08:12 pm

Thank You

Thank you for the kind words and comments Meridian. I really appreciate you taking the time to read my poem. :)
Your Wife (10.12.239.16) -- Monday, March 1 2004, 09:19 pm

Hey

I have to agree with Meridian, this poem very inspiring to me.. even though i read it before you put it on here, but hey! i love you here is a rose for a wonderful poem!

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everett (209.240.207.249) -- Tuesday, March 2 2004, 05:27 am

thanks

aww thanks, im glad you liked it.. thanks for being there and putting up with me as i wrote it :)
LinzAy (152.163.253.66) -- Thursday, March 4 2004, 09:31 am

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Me's like this one Ev!!!!
everett (209.240.207.249) -- Friday, March 5 2004, 09:44 pm

:)

thanks!
barb (209.112.22.78) -- Sunday, March 7 2004, 12:46 am

mr lucky

your poem is very good everett. you are lucky you have faith,you have a loving and supportive wife. keep writing what you feel. those are the special kind:))
everett (209.240.207.249) -- Monday, March 15 2004, 04:42 am

thanks

Thanks barb, i really appreciate your words and thank you for taking the time to read one of my writings :)
Tammy (66.38.4.225) -- Wednesday, March 24 2004, 06:04 pm

WOW

Truely great poem....This is some awesome work!!!!!
everett (209.240.207.249) -- Wednesday, March 24 2004, 08:08 pm

Tammy

Thank You! :)
 
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