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Together
7 August, 2003
Author: Everett

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(co-written with Brenda)


When I am with you
time seems endless
I felt like I was in heaven
I felt complete bliss
with every kiss.
Your soft hands
across my face
when I look in your eyes
everything falls into place.
Every night I spend with you
is better then a dream
I love you more and more each day
you mean everything to me
every waking second of every day
I think of you
and the nights we spend together

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Leah06 (12.232.5.189) -- Sunday, August 17 2003, 02:22 am

everett and brenda

GREAT POEM! You 2 work well together. Its sweet and smooth. Nice job!
Everett&Brenda (24.92.105.249) -- Saturday, August 30 2003, 05:33 pm

thanks

thanks leah... i am glad that you like it!
 
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