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Until Then
23 May, 2003
Author: Everett

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I had a dream the other day.
A dream I did not want to leave.
We were together, we were in love.
Your beautiful eyes were looking right through
mine and into my soul.
How you did that ill never know.
You filled my empty soul with a simple kiss.
I've waited for this.
I never thought i could feel this way.
It wouldnt last, the feeling was taken away.
I'm awake now staring at the ceiling.
The truth is, I dont even know what love is.
Ive never felt it, does it even exist?
I've been patient, patience is running out for me.
I cant wait until i can feel the thrill of being happy with someone.
Until then, it will simply be a dream in this dreamer's heart.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Leah06 (12.232.5.189) -- Tuesday, May 27 2003, 01:48 am

Almost every night's dream

I know how you feel, almost every dream i have (80%) Of them have to do with the same thing. Great topic and great poem!!!!
LinzAy (152.163.252.71) -- Tuesday, May 27 2003, 06:00 am

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Beautiful Ev!! love it!
Brenda Michelle (64.12.97.13) -- Wednesday, June 11 2003, 06:14 pm

WOW

this is a really great poem! i really enjoyed reading it! and i know that one day you will find that person that you talk about in your dreams!!!
Tammy (66.38.4.92) -- Thursday, March 25 2004, 06:55 am

Everett

WOW....How beautiful. I am becoming addicted to your poetry!!!!!!!!!
everett (209.240.207.249) -- Thursday, March 25 2004, 07:19 am

:)

aww thanks tammy. ive been reading your poetry as well and im loving it!
 
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