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The Seven Shadows 3
25 March, 2003
Author: Everett

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(Part 3: Closing The Book)


The clouds begin to break as darkness seems to fade away.
The five demons that once danced are nowhere to be seen.
A slight breeze flows through the almost deserted land.
Dead trees are all around, branches break and fall to the ground.
Three shadows still roam through the night.
The voice of the storyteller faded away with everything else.
The night sky is different this time around.
It's changing colors, its not dead anymore.
The sky is breathing light.
Looking up i see the clouds scatter to make room.
Light falls down and burns through two of the shadows.

Once there were seven shadows that roamed and searched through here.
One now remains.
The light now surrounds me and the land.
Darkness has been taken away.
Off in the distance there is something lying in the dirt.
Its an open book.
The book from which the storyteller read.
I bend down to pick it up, its on the last page.
Three stories were told of seven shadows that lived in the dark.
Six didnt make it through the night.
One is alive standing in the light....me.
I close the book and walk away.
The book sits in the dirt waiting for another to open and tell this story.
The story of seven shadows.
A story of a lost shadow finding the light.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

LinzAy (64.12.96.47) -- Monday, April 28 2003, 11:19 pm

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Wow ev. Ended totally different than i expected..tho i'm not completely sure o fwhat i expected. Love how it turned out Ev......another good one!
everett (67.29.163.135) -- Tuesday, April 29 2003, 05:26 am

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Thanks Linzay! im glad i surprised you with somethin you didnt expect. thats always somethin a writer wants to hear! :) well only if its good...you know what i mean..right? lol
LinzAy (205.188.209.9) -- Tuesday, April 29 2003, 07:04 am

lol

Hehe...ye ai gotchya Ev! heh......
Brenda Michelle (10.144.2.42) -- Tuesday, April 29 2003, 07:36 pm

WOW

wow this is a great way to end the story! i really like this one. you should write more like this story!
Tammy (66.38.4.92) -- Thursday, March 25 2004, 07:02 am

Closing The Book

I read the whole story.....AWESOME, AWESOME. so when your published I am buying, and I want your autograph.
This was truely an amazing story everett!!!!!!!! After I was through reading it I wanted more, So I went back, and read it again.
everett (209.240.207.249) -- Thursday, March 25 2004, 07:12 am

hey tammy

wow thank you so much! oh dont worry if i ever get published ill send u a autograph copy, only if i get your autograph lol. thank you again... i really appreciate your kind words
Meridian (64.12.116.205) -- Thursday, March 25 2004, 11:28 am

Story

Everett, you truly are blessed with such poetic talent as this! I loved it from beginning to the ending!
everett (209.240.207.249) -- Thursday, March 25 2004, 10:33 pm

Meridian

thank you so much, im really glad you liked this story. ya know when i first wrote it, i was doubting if it was any good :)
 
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